dead Marilyn 2010 – foto by Smith
Surfing Sufi
Need and desire
Lie in wait to bait logic
Mine over manner
The truth relies lies
To refocus demeanor
And rectify whys
Right and wrong waver
Moral measures miss the song
Basic good better
To step is to start
To continue the matter
The race to be one
Frog and scorpion
Are polluting the river
Need kill desire
Ego needs large print
To re-see itself in same
Magnifying mere
Limbic low limbo
Fight fear, flee phoned-in fodder
Hear in inner ear
dead Elvis 2010 – foto by Smith
I actually really like your haiku, especially these, and I am not a fan of the form. Good job.